Large shopping malls are replacing with small shops. What is your opinion on this? Do you this is good or bad change?
The effect of shopping mall replacement, which is always debatable, has become more controversial. In recent years, the substantial influence of shopping malls replacement has sparked controversy over the potential impact of this trend. Intriguingly, while some people have positive opinions, others have negative views. It can be agreed that large shopping malls play crucial role in people’s life. It has certain drawbacks. This essay will elaborate the both sides good or bad change and lead to plausible conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons to prove that large shopping malls are the better option, but the most important one is rooted in the fact that people can save their time and shop everything under one roof. For example, entertainment and small playground are there for children as well. In addition, people do not need to bargain while shopping because the prices are fixed of all the items. A recent research in this area reveals that the people who live in metro cities prefer to do go in large shopping malls because of all the conveniences. Thus, large shopping malls have advantages.
Nevertheless, some people hold an opposing view and tend to believe that large shopping malls hit the small shops entrepreneur, but the most alarming one stem from the fact that less people or middle class people make choice to shop on small shops because they may not afford the costly clothes and so on. A recent research found that large shopping malls stop the income of small business people. Therefore, small shops are also important.
By and large, from what has been discussed, it can be stated that large shopping malls not only have advantages, it is set of trade off of between both .Hence, and one should weigh out both sides before coming to conclusion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: shops'; shop's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02675585284 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6017401485 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56856187291 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5186031956 50.4703680194 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.2 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319247825339 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110731649107 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637262185177 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189677720864 0.151781067708 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608216948379 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.