University experience is more important than university’s degree. Some people argue that university life in job market? Do you agree or disagree?
The importance of university experience, which is always debatable, has become controversial. In recent years, the real influence of university experience has sparked controversy over the potential impact of this trend. Intriguingly, while some people have positive opinions, others have negative views. it can be agreed that university experience plays the crucial role to get university degrees. it has certain drawbacks. this essay will elaborate both sides of the argument and lead to plausible conclusion.
At the outset, there are many reasons to prove that university experience is necessary but the most important one is rooted the fact the student who study at university, they have more exposure to learn various culture of people who can be beneficial for their future business context. Moreover, universities have big labs as compared to college, then student can get chance to do experiments according to their field of study. A recent research in area reveals that World Education Association found that university experience people are higher wages than the other people. therefore, experience is an essential.
Nevertheless, some people hold an opposing view and tend to believe that university degree is more significant due to many reason but the most alarming one stems from the fact that people can not consider the bright future without the university degree because there are most of the jobs which are degree based. according to recent research in this area reveals that thirty student out of hundreds do not get the job because they do not have the degrees. Hence, the university degree is important.
By and large, from what have discussed above, it can be stated that it is set of trade-off between both sides of the argument , therefore, one should way out both sides before coming to conclusion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, while, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31399317406 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78476722582 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539249146758 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.7754831592 50.4703680194 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.214285714 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327222001686 0.242375264174 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115556337148 0.0925447433944 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839862066703 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187923736246 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109491519976 0.0609392437508 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.