Which areas of concern should government allocate funds to? Climate change, education or public health? Explain your ideas with example.
The issue of government funds spends which is debatable has become more controversial. In recent years, the substantial influence of government funds expenditure has sparked debate over the potential impact of this issue. Intriguingly, all the people have separate opinion for this issue. While some considers that money should be spending on education and health, others think that climate change is the very important currant issue. It can be agreed that both have certain drawbacks. This essay will elaborate the both side of the issue and lead to the logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons which prove that education and health are the important factor, but most important one is rooted in the fact that education plays significant role in the development of every nation because if the people are educated then future can be changed by their thoughts, skills and knowledge to run the country. For example, India is spending more money on education system to build the better future of the country. Moreover, health is another factor to make country healthy and fit because if people have more health related facilities then they can prove themselves stronger at their work field. A recent research in this area reveals that US spend lot money on health to make citizen healthier. Thus education and health is important.
Nevertheless, some people hard an opposing view and tend to believe that Climate change is more concerning matter today than education and health. There are many causes behind this, but most alarming one is global warming. Government should spend funds to improve and control the effect of global warming. According to recent research, it is found that Australia has no ozone layer, that’s reason that people are suffering form skin cancer due to direct sunlight on skin. Hence, climate change is serious issue.
By and large, from what have discussed above, it can be stated that it is set of trade off between both issues; therefore, one should weigh both side of the argument before coming to any conclusion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1207.87684729 144% => OK
No of words: 339.0 242.827586207 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12389380531 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52266722916 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551622418879 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.4479077694 50.4703680194 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.176470588 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20363555152 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674930181131 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552008441542 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109916781157 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501706530193 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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