LARGE SHOPPING MALLS SHOULD BE REPLACE LOCAL SHOP? DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.
Surely v, there has been o time in history where the live in of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typically day revels large shopping malls should be replace local shop has been the one of most prominent topic in the contemporary discussion people have always been intrigued to analyze and explain regarding this I would to say.
To start with, there are so many malls in all city and all malls provide the good clothes and all types things the major reason that people prefer malls is the convenience of getting our daily needs in cloud grocers, clothes, shoes and books etc. And malls are provide the cinema in under the roof and it is gives the 50%off all products and all products are under the warranty but some malls make the rule for shopping like not buy the product under the1000 rupees.
On the other hand, there is some disadvantage of malls firstly poor people are buy the shoes, clothes, and other one thing. are taking away local and small shops thus the decision to promote large shopping malls taking the bread out of the mouths of many people. The shopkeepers are left with no means of earning a living. Moreover in malls people are tempted o buy unnecessary things hence burning a hole in their pocket.
Overall conclusion, malls are provide the and more faculties under the one roof so mall are good the own place and mall always provide the good things rather then local shop.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
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...l always provide the good things rather then local shop.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65612648221 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2350162273 2.71678728327 82% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549407114625 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6421273946 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.888888889 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1111111111 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 7.25397266985 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27854963965 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108708879288 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106572163241 0.071462118173 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174949403703 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477449761351 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 53.1260098522 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.9458128079 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.