In many towns and cities, large shopping malls are replacing small local shops. What is your opinion on this? Do you think this is a positive development? Use your own experiences.
Nowadays more and more small shops are getting replaced by large shopping malls in towns and cities. This trend has become a subject of considerable controversy for people. This essay will show that the advance of shopping malls is overall a positive trend.
At first, shopping malls tend to provide a lot of convince for customers by accumulating large numbers of different shops and brands as well as variety of entertainments in the same area. Some recent social polls show that purchasers find it very comfortable to have a possibility compare prices for same goods among different brands and shops when they are relatively close to each other. It's also worth to mention that the entertainments and child areas in the malls simplify child care routines for parents that are going to shop.
At second, the mall buildings despite their huge sizes indeed help saving space due to being multi-level which positively impacts city or town development. An average mall contains about fifty different shops on its multiple levels. The same number of shops will definitely occupy a considerably larger area in city or town streets if they are build independently.
In conclusion, although some people may miss a cosy vibe of small local shops, I firmly believe that the advance of large malls brings more positive changes to the development and economy of both cities and towns.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to save' or 'save'.
Suggestion: to save; save
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06578947368 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67948715825 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635964912281 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0148977806 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296966612228 0.242375264174 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121871458218 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668961651463 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18266457385 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075589477276 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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