Law Changes Human Behaviour
Laws are sets of rules and regulation placed in the society to guide and control people. Most individuals have argued that laws can change people’s behaviour while others think that it has no influence on people. In my opinion, law has a great influence on peoples' attitudes and can be said that they help in molding people’s daily life style. This essay will discuss how law can be of great influence to people’s lives.
Firstly, a lawless society is inhabitable because when people know that their actions have no negative consequences, they will tend to go wide in their actions. Take for example, if there is no law forbidding killing of fellow citizens, an angered person can wake up and kill as many as he/she likes since no law will hold him. Evidence has shown that most people became responsible after serving a jail terms because of the punishments received while serving.
Secondly, naturally people likes freedom, if there is no law to checkmate people’s actions they will want to exercise their freedom in a negative way. There has been an increase in killing in the US because of lack of gun control which has given more people access to guns. One will argue that if there is a law restricting people from using gun freely, the case of indiscriminate killings would have stopped.
To conclude, laws are important in a society and they help to change human behaviours. If there are no laws ,the society will be inhabitable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...hey will want to exercise their freedom in a negative way. There has been an increase in killing ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e human behaviours. If there are no laws ,the society will be inhabitable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89558232932 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72838294282 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550200803213 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7387841446 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.583333333 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225076333746 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967348911698 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998738218238 0.071462118173 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157799090055 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102941406438 0.0609392437508 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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