Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about whether law changes human behaviour. While it is possible to claim that law can actually impact on people's behaviour, my view is that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
There are many reasons why law changes human behaviour. One of them is that people become afraid to take part in things that are not legal, for instance, one can refrain from stealing as it against the law and can cause arrest. It can also be argued that this help law makers to find culprits. Moreover, it should also be taken into account that this helps police to restore order between conflicts against law.
However, those who argue that law changes behaviour have a different view say it can actually be a good thing. Firstly, it can be claimed that law changes does not affect human behaviour as they are already under laws. Then, there are concerns about cultural practices that are not affected by law changes, such as Christianity.
While there are arguments on both sides of the story, my opinion is that law do change human behaviour and people should take law seriously. I would strongly recommend that law changes to be more to avoid criminal activities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85267857143 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43980055616 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566964285714 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3584783857 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5833333333 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242686639103 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108656933425 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772849068474 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174376917621 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534993670032 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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