Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?

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Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?

Law is for the betterment of society and individuals. The consequences of obeying or disobeying laws impacts people in their everyday lives. Thereby, law influences how people behave with others in a society. Breaking the law would mean trouble. This fear of consequences makes people behave in both their social and professional capacities. For example, earlier ‘male homosexual acts’ were a crime in many nations and now with advancement in law, people are now accepting gay members and open about their sexuality.
Many times, people experience legal problems, and these legal problems can impact negatively on their life areas. The mental harassment can bring considerable adverse consequences like going against the system. On the other hand, the law to ensure women’s rights makes the women feel equal and safe in society thus bringing a positive change in their behavior. In this sense, laws do influences people behavior in very significant ways.
In conclusion, as a result of facing possible penalties, people are forced to behave responsibly and do good to other and society. Obey the law and get the reward. The law constantly changes our behavior and perception toward many things in our daily lives consciously and unconsciously.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 198.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37878787879 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91370372919 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616161616162 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1533662389 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9230769231 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267050787924 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980356401627 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586368677409 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182744584791 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00678503313589 0.0609392437508 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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