Laws can change human behaviour or not?
In today's fast paced life, laws can change human behaviour at an exponential rate. Some likeminded people foster this thinking that it is a necessary evil. My views are in harmony with this ideology. The following paragraphs tend to highlight some conspicuous aspects on this issue.
To embark with, there is deluge of arguments in favor of my stance but the most preponderent factor that needs to be considered that laws can inculcate many types of behavioural changes like enhance the sense of responsibility, obedience and so on. Another key justification upholding this notion is that people become more responsible towards their duties. For instance, in case of traffic rules people cannot cross the road during the red light this shows that rules can make individuals more obedient. Thus, laws plays an indispensible part in every one's life.
Another key justification that cannot be put on the backburner is that laws can also make the maases more punctual. In other words, they can complete their work on time and due to this, they get praise in their working place for the better completion of their work. Furthermore, owing to laws, people become successful in their career and enjoy luxurious life. Hence, the role of laws in making the career of employee is instrumental indeed.
In conclusion, having pondered over above stated, it is quite fair and justifiable to say that laws are essential for everyone because they can help in the overall development of person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07346938776 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74036572952 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624489795918 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9230769231 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6153846154 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298677917564 0.242375264174 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950627436728 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132405939221 0.071462118173 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168274470274 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576920266747 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.