In a less developed country, the disadvantages of tourism can be as great as advantages
In this modern world, people started travelling often and tourism becomes an industry which affects any country's economy. Some people believe that tourism is good for less developed countries whereas others believe that it has negative affect on the particular country's culture. This contentious topic has been profoundly debated on several forums. I will gauge both the advantages and disadvantages meticulously before inclining towards a rational conclusion.
Throwing light on the advantages, tourism is a good method to boost the economy of any country because it helps to grow local market. A local business which might have access only limited market grows rapidly when tourists visit local market; Furthermore, tourism brings other business as well which provide financial stability in the country. For example, Goa is state of India which receives tourist from all over the world, and it created many businesses in this region.
Paradoxically, tourists come from different countries and with different mindset and this thing affects local culture in negative manner. More influence of other culture is also bad impact, local culture which is not a good thing for any society. A person who has criminal mind brings many unethical substances with him and it increases crime rate in particular area. For instance, In Goa, there are many groups those are running narcotics fraud which is affecting local people as well.
To summaries, although there are some drawbacks of promoting tourism in country, those can be controlled by implicating strict rules and regulations and tourism can bring lot of prosperity in the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4375 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67120959825 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62109375 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7391448705 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179030907607 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570088906567 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837320684343 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125225373887 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111257024065 0.0609392437508 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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