Life experience is a better teacher than school or foreign education. Give an example and support opinion.
Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a construction dialogue on the precedence of life experience for people can lead to though-provoking discussions. Irrespective of the numerous arguments that exit on either side, my opinion is that foreign and international education is essential for students; however, life experience is better and more valuable for people.
There are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. To begin with, life experience plays a significant role in people future, and it gives people more chances to decide wisely in several situations. it is also important to note that when a person faces a problem for second time in his working field, he acts more wisely due to his previous experience in the similar solution. Therefore, the aforementioned argument shows that not only education can support in several instances.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that schools and universities educate only students the theoretical aspects, and they do not have the proper timing to prepare students for the actual life problems. First and foremost, because of the numerous problems and situations that people get interact with during their life, they build up their practical knowledge which was not acquired during their education. This exemplifies that life situations and its problems allow a good opportunity for people to acquire advanced skills.
To sum up, there is evidence to support the argument I have provided, and hence, my opinion is that we cannot deny the importance of the foreign education, but the life experience is way better for people to face the actual ups and downs in their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.75862068966 313% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21771217712 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90745873014 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571955719557 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6438201371 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.4 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22219245862 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817566957661 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716209091693 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146477594613 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671501218129 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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