Education is important as it teach ethics and life value as it teaches us practical things for future employment. What is your opinion?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue, on the importance of education for further employment, can lead to though-provoking discussions. Irrespective to the numerous arguments that exit on either side, my opinion is that education is essential for people further career.
There are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. To begin with, current market is very competitive, and companies set certain qualifications for their applicants. It is important to note that when the person is well-educated and graduated from a reputable university, it increases his hiring probabilities .Therefore, the aforementioned argument shows that education plays a significant role in employment process.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that the prestigious universities help their students for future employment, and they organize special job forums which involve multinational companies. First and foremost, students are being introduced during those forums, thus, getting good jobs are mostly secured for students after their graduation. This exemplifies at the fact that practical participation by students is noticed by several organization.
To sum up, there is a strong evidence to support the notions I have provided, and hence, my opinion is that without good education, future job opportunities might be affected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 206.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79126213592 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36257829543 2.71678728327 124% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679611650485 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5517352999 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.555555556 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168385960372 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595123158179 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358483267507 0.071462118173 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903685303643 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034848315175 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 11.5310837438 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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