Many people are growing overweight, some people beleive that increasing the prices of food that leads to fattening is the best solution , what effects can be have to what extend do you aggree or disagree?
Food plays a major role in growing overweight. It is beleived that increasing the prices of food
will affect people from buying food and reduce the risk of overweight. Now a days each one is
earning money to eat well. They have become more foodie and trying different style of food like
asian, continental, wester,etc.
There is no excuse in food among everyone for any specific reason especially for food,
Even if there is a raise in prices, they will continue to consume food. Overweight can be
controlled by dieting and exercise rather then government investing in more useless ideas.
It is concluded that increase in price will not stop anyone from eating food and loosing weight.
Government should take a wise decision in helping people for loosing weight rather than increasing
the food prices
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 31.9359605911 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 1207.87684729 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 135.0 242.827586207 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16296296296 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.92707691288 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52117506951 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 139.433497537 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681481481481 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 379.143842365 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8171563313 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.125 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.25397266985 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.12807881773 218% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225831271072 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102161355301 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706355263913 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868679260867 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728908945855 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 55.0591133005 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.