In some countries, the quality of life in larger cities is declining. Why do you think this is happening ?
What measures can be taken to stop it.
In Some continents the status of living capability in metropolitan cities are reducing at an alarming rate. I believe overpopulation is the main reason for this to happen. We will discuss the cause and solution for this problem in this essay.
To begin with, the qualities of life in the metropolitan cities are reducing at an alarming rate due to several factors. Overpopulation is main cause of discomfort in larger cities. Too many people living in a particular area creates pollution related to air, noise, congestion and smoke from vehicles. Additionally, the exploitation of resources on a particular area will lead to rise in the price of the commodities, which in turn the burden of the cost will fall on every single one of them living in that area. Moreover, the congestion and traffic jam in a big city is increasing everyday due to poor planning of roads and due to overpopulation more number of trees is being cut for construction of newer buildings to accommodate the rising number of population.
On the other hand, the quality of life can be improved in the larger cities if the government has proper plans to construct a new city and individual’s responsibility to maintain decorum and follow the rules and regulation properly. I believe the government should relocate some IT and Industrial sectors to a new area to reduce the population in the already crowded area and construct the new sectors in the properly planned areas for the future purpose. Moreover, Government and Individuals should plant more trees for the overcrowded cities to survive and to reduce the air pollution, which is main reason for the recent health related problems.
In conclusion, the government should regulate the usage of vehicles in the larger cities and construct new bridges, plant more trees and plan the city to survive efficiently to increase the quality of living. Additionally, the citizens should not over consume the resources and follow the rules and laws made by the government for the city to survive in a comfort manner.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, as for, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02352941176 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9891730812 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476470588235 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3644233486 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.384615385 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148244842186 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608418993236 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497453217525 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099063560962 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218639889564 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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