With the advancement in technology we have good access to myriad number of social networking websites such as Facebook or Twitter. In my opinion, these websites have a lot of negative influence on our life and In the coming paragraphs, I would elucidate the same.
Firstly, it is an undeniable fact that social media has changed the method of communication earlier where people interact face to face but, now we tend to logon to websites like Facebook to get in touch with different people around the world. People waste a lot of their productive time on those websites either by chatting with each other or visiting somebody's else profile or watching videos all these actions in my opinion is a waste of time. We could easily use this time to do something which is constructive and more valuable to society.
Also, according to a survey conducted by a prestigious organization is has been identified that crimes related to social media has increased dramatically. People make fake profile to trap other people and misuse them for criminal activities. Cyber crime is at par because of the use of social media. Facebook initially was inaugurated with the intention to remain inactive from your daily chaos for some time. Teenagers are the one who are using these websites the most and spend at-least half of their time on social media.
On the bright side, Facebook or Twitter for some are used as a mode of sharing vital information as well, with the help of sharing content of these sites people often get help from other individual around the world.
Hence aforementioned, the foregoing discussion will propounds to the view that disadvantages of social media outweighs it's advantages and in my opinion, these websites should be ban by the government to stop the wastage of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'propound'
Suggestion: propound
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, well, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 31.9359605911 160% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 302.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94039735099 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72720667408 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572847682119 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2034267796 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154481248136 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058196360471 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392525978796 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857137277938 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041521083404 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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