It's not easy to become an inspiration for others. Being an accomplished person is not an easy job, as it comes with lots of sacrifices, immense hard-work and commendable dedication towards the goals. Eventually, unwanted neighbourhood, difficult circumstances, inevitable situations and uncontrollable failures never impact the underlying belief of becoming successful. One example of such inspiring story is the journey of Prime Minister Narendra Modi.
As of now, Modi is the 13th most influential person in the world, currently on the agenda of winning all states of India with his governing party - BJP and considered as one of the most creative political representative throughout the world. But, his journey towards this glorious peak is daunting and laborious. Since, during his childhood days, he used to live in severe poverty conditions with detrimental surroundings. For survival, he used to help his father at tea shop, serving tea at railway station. But, with all this happening, he had this belief that this is just the beginning of better future that is about to come, never gave-up, never surrendered to the shortcomings of life.
Moreover, as his family belonged to the Other-Backward caste(OBC), he faced lots of discrimination and criticism when he decided to do something for his nation. After several struggles and failures, he was able to commence his political career with BJP by running elections, first at small towns and cities, then state - Gujarat - and then whole India. His background never affected him in any manner, but actually made him invincible to the tough circumstances and situations life might introduce in his journey towards being successful.
Hence, if one has such strong belief with formidable dedication and motivation to achieve goals at any cost, then bad neighbourhood just becomes another reason for being an accomplished person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39322033898 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08624327089 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613559322034 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0995522559 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.384615385 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0778768242 0.242375264174 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264527381949 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233889887883 0.071462118173 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495902627846 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00761468279962 0.0609392437508 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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