Is tourism in less developed countries advantage or disadvantage? Discuss your views and give your opinion.

Tourism provides an excellent source of revenue for any country, either developing or developed. It also helps in expressing the cultural diversity and ethnicity, using the country's heritage and spectacular locations. This essay will explain why tourism could be advantageous in less developed countries, but it can inadvertently represent a backward side of the country, which could affect country's reputation at the global level.

In under-developed countries, tourism can open new portals of economic growth and prosperity. Tourism promoted effectively can introduce a great source of revenue for the nation with better intellectual growth. For example, tourists will visit a country only if they are attracted towards something unique or profound and if they do, then new visitors will improve gradually since nation's tourism standards are getting appreciated throughout the world. Hence, this will directly improve their capability to cope with foreign standards leading to better prospects of growth.

In contrast, tourism reviews presented globally have an astounding impact in molding nation's reputation. In less developed countries, there are chances when a country is not able to cope up with the tourist standards, as they currently lack such luxurious amenities. For instance, hotels with better quality, medical conditions with adequate hygiene and other necessities might be missing in under-developed countries. In such cases, tourists will represent undermined images to the world of current standards in such nations, which will cause detrimental effects at world level.

In less developed countries, introducing tourism have both pros and cons. In my opinion, tourism can drastically improve economic stability and growth prospects of such nations, per se they can provide well-maintained living standards with excellent hygienic conditions.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in contrast, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84615384615 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99652954413 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59706959707 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7455657216 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.769230769 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156377583155 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645082301509 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477345255421 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109569914073 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038081052874 0.0609392437508 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.65 11.5310837438 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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