Many young people get married before finishing their study and establishing a good job. To what extant do you agree? Please explain.
It is undeniable that Marriage is so pivotal for all of us. However, there are some members of the society believe that young people who get married before finishing their study considered so beneficial for young people while others have opponent point of view. In my opinion, i inclined to the view of getting married after graduation and joining a suitable job.
On one hand, The marriage during the study will have a negative effect on the couples.Couples will not have enough time to focus on their studies and achieve the required tasks in time. Therefore, their concentration and energy will be lost due to the basic requirements of the life. Besides, young people still not have enough incomes to spend on their studies and on the life expenses. Therefore, they will depend on their parents which will negatively effected on the community.
In addition, young people still not have a clear vision regarding the selection of right partner in the life and self confidence to face the challenge of the life. Thus, the right age and time for marriage is after the completion of study and get the right job which will provide them with the required money to spend on their family. This will reduce the rate of divorce and will give the chance for better life for the new generation. Marriage after completion of the study will give the couples , the time to for the selection of right person to share his/her life. For Instance, There was a report which was published in Sadny university about the marriage after completion of the study and get the right job, enhance the idea that couples who got married in this condition, would be able to complete their life for longer period and be in happy environment and provide successful generations.
To recapitulate, the forgoing discussion about the marriage during study support the point of view that the marriage is a great step and we should take it after getting the right job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
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Suggestion: Couples
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 31.9359605911 157% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 333.0 242.827586207 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81081081081 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5233677874 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462462462462 0.580463131201 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2451137663 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.230769231 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191141287468 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803853903386 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704957291305 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13525283798 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670977292452 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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