More and more students are studying at universities abroad, either because it is cheaper, or because they feel they can receive a better education, or because it will provide them with greater professional opportunities. Which one do you think is the most important reason?
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading
Studing at universities is so pivotal for students.They could receive a better education chance or it will give them the chance for unique opportunities. From my point of view the studing abroad is a goolden chance for getting better education. In the following issue, i will expalin the opioion and provide some examples.
It is undeniable that student who take the chance to travel to other countries to study, will gain tremendous amount of experiences. He/ she will not only meet new people, civilizations, communities, making new friendship and learning new things, but also he /she will be able to go through new education level. He/ she will be able to widen his/her horizons.Joining the international universities, will have a prominent effect on the students. The education system will be more advance. In Egypt, Doctor Ahmed Zewal; he is a doctor in the chemistry. he was a model for all students in Egypt as he completed his studies in united states of America. He challange himself and lean alot of things. Therefore, in USA .He was awarded the nobel prize in 2000.
on the other hand, there are some cons for studing abroad such as students suffering homesick. Some students as well not adopt with the new enviroment.However, as a communities, individuals and governements, we should encourage our students to travel and study abroad. There are a myriad of benfits which will reflect in the furure on our society.
In conclusion, my point of view is to let pur students to go aborad as this will support the idea that these students will return back after compeltion of thier studies with all knewledges to enhance thier countries and help for the development of the people in thier societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95833333333 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01270458042 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3510843878 50.4703680194 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168417026286 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558929093635 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438025055209 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105666646684 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413461862561 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 74.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.