The mass media including TV, radio, newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?
Nowadays, mass media plays a dominant role, which has attracted many controversies and has drawn attention from the public. It is agreed that mass media has a positive impact on society, while on the other hand, stands a perspective that it has some negative consequences on their thinking. But In my opinion, mass media plays a constructive role in society. This essay will elaborate on both sides and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are various reasons how mass media has positively affected the society, and the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that it gives freedom to people to express themselves on a bigger platform. As an illustration, mass media plays an important role for people who are shy to present themselves in a public arena. Furthermore, keeping themselves tuned to the world broaden their horizons. Hence, this shows that mass media like status updates and twitter handles is a new way to development.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of mass media and the most alarming one roots from the fact that it displays the communal riots and violent attacks among the people. For instance, it is often seen that television and newspapers demonstrate many cases of rapes, child abuse and caste discrimination which shake the trust of humanity. Thus, mass media has a negative influence on society.
In the light of above discussion, it is concluded that the impact of mass media is prominent, although the way it presents the thoughts of people can make or break the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people can make or break the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05303030303 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7974145219 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549242424242 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5557738481 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.166666667 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15997850411 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677878380398 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552255683917 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959834203532 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277257699065 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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