The mass media including TV, Radio and newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield to a consensual agreement, the constructive dialogue on the mass media can lead to a thought-provoking discussion. my opinion is, irrespective of numerous arguments on either side, that the mass media influence our society and shaps our opinions.
there are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. To begin with, many of us spend big part of his day either watching tv or reading newspaper. It is also important to note that if we are not taking care we will be in trouble. Therefore, the aforementioned discussion shows that the mass media influence our society and shaps our opinions.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that well-educated people not affected by the media as they can find the correct information from different sources. While people watching tvs or listening to Radio, they only select the right channel that provides trusted information This exemplifies that in Egypt there are only few number of tv programs that people watches on daily basis.
I conclusion, I see there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided and hence. my opinion is that the mass media influence our society and shaps our opinions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04901960784 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91877086727 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9825479125 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321030910022 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133207982971 0.0925447433944 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174938808271 0.071462118173 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207545834127 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105608247231 0.0609392437508 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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