Medical technology is responsible for the human’s life expectancy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
From last many times, the medical science is developing like anything and more and more people are benefited from it. Medical technology is responsible for human’s life expectancy has created the chaos in the country. Some people argue that it is worthless to talk about while some considered that it the greatest attainment of the society. However, I firmly believe that there is a significant increase in the human life expectancy due to the medical science. This essay will further deliver you necessary findings before jumping to the conclusion.
To begin with the positive side, there are the myriad benefits of the medical science but the most eye-catching is, nowadays there is early detection of life-threatening diseases like Caner, Aids is now possible. Moreover, now almost the all the hospitals and medical centers are equipped with the latest technology so people have not to move from one city to other for the treatment as well as scans. For instance, earlier MRI scanners were available at the only private hospitals but now it is also available at the government hospitals so, one can afford it and take advantage of it.
Going forward, The regular health checkups and constant observation of health care experts are usually expensive and it can burn a hole in patient’s family. It’s good that one can stay for long years with his or her family and enjoy happy moments but financial burden can cause conflict within the family.
In the view of the above arguments, one can reach to the conclusion that, advancement in the medical technology has proven the boon for the human’s life expectancy but the financial burden is also a sweltering question for the families.
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...a sweltering question for the families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08540925267 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77975810611 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.2313621146 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.909090909 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247729386853 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100272376282 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111637604319 0.071462118173 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151666665343 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767257077681 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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