Medical technology is responsible for the longevity of human life. Is it a curse or a blessing? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Medical technology has grown so rigorous that it has increased the life span of people. Though, some people say that it has resulted in a catastrophe whereas others contend that it has benefited the society as a whole. But, in my perception, medical advancements have resulted in augmenting quality of life by making cure for many ailments even with a slight disadvantage.
Undoubtedly, enhancements in medical sciences have led the mankind towards healthfulness as nowadays cure has been found even for some fatal diseases such as cancer, lung-disorder, hearing impairment and blindness etcetera. Not only, it has made people more confident and competent but also has improved the vitality of a person's life as elders are living longer, thus they can impart moral values to their children. Moreover, for instance, established cricketer Yuvraj Singh survived while being on the death bed just because of latest technology in medical science.
However, on the contrary, there is an exception as medical technology has also resulted in making countries overpopulated due to the less fatality rate and more mortality rate. Numerous countries are facing this problem which further aggravates the situation due to the upliftment in the number old workers at workplaces and also it creates a problem for some families as it rarely creates extra burden on them.
In conclusion, technological advancements in medical have proved advantageous for the society. Not to forget, older people are the main essence and pillars of a family and in the absence of them, the relationship bond amid members of the family may falter or diminish. Eventually, advancements in medical are a blessing in disguise.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 322, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...but also has improved the vitality of a persons life as elders are living longer, thus ...
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Line 2, column 528, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...ile being on the death bed just because of latest technology in medical science. Howeve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29739776952 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97869050377 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609665427509 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5531608064 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.545454545 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171968120272 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732243028347 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054671951026 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103054116584 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291326374994 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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