Some people believe law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

The contemporary word of human lives is shaped by latest trends and approaches. Whether, low changes the human behavior and change our culture has been a moot point for discussion. Before coming to the conclusion, I woulkd like to list down on this specific topic in my forthcoming paragraph. To begin with, nowadays words very change by new technologies and inventions so low are also change shaped our society with many ways. Their are myraid reasons to explain it how low impact our lives and behaviour, first and furthermore mostly people follow the rules and regulations to apply by the lows with this they behave good and start their lives by followed rules. Apart from this, if people not folloewd well then low should punished people who break the riles to apply by the govenment. It is clear that if any country have rules and low they become a successful and powerful country but if there people not accept their rules logically it make grim problem tro the country. Furthermore, somepeople contend of couter saying that, low are strictly apply by the government and they will not accept that rulles with the hearty. While, that rulles good for them and save to them from the any kind of under crime and other problems. On the other hand, it only people perceptions to agree with the rulles or not and become their country crime free. In conclussion, i would like say that their are lots of impacts to low on the humans behavior they do their duties with the best wat and become their country crime free and happy atmosphere.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, well, while, apart from, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71003717472 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38908834523 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561338289963 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.319617922 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.181818182 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138368543282 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576576859503 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538360715097 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138368543282 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 53.1260098522 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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