Mind Illnesses
Nowadays, scientists and specially neuroscientists presume that mental abnormalities phenomenon has might been originated from individuals lifestyle. However, in contrary, some other prominent savants believe that these illnesses except lifestyle have been impressed by divers factors. In this essay I will discuss about an illnesses and its consequents.
Black color has been constantly used as a common color to print books, newspapers and magazines thus, we would see them black. However, a group of people have asserted that they never see them as black! Instead they might see the number 4 as blue or say that flavor of cherry is round and surprisingly the sniff of roses bouquet is pink! These people are infected by a sickness called Synesthesia. Weak boundaries between the senses have effected a sense, for instance, sight, may seep across to another sense such as taste, in order that the color of a rose might seem as a sweet taste.
Synesthesia, not merely occurs to synesthete, but may come to pass for healthy people having no sickness occasionally, although, synesthete encounter this situations constantly. In other word relevance between the various sensory perceptions in patients are consistent over time, for instance someone who tastes a song of music as a sour flavor will entirely taste it sour. A report of an old Synesthete explains that how he felt disillusioned when he taste a banana and it did not correspond to the color that he imagined previously.
Though, Synesthesia has known for several centuries, however, scientists have recently figured out that this phenomenon is more frequentative amid women and left-hander and that it emerges to continue in families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'abnormalities'' or 'abnormality's'?
Suggestion: abnormalities'; abnormality's
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Message: Did you mean 'have been' or 'be'?
Suggestion: have been; be
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Did you mean 'sours'?
Suggestion: sours
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tastes'.
Suggestion: tastes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30996309963 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95721408194 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649446494465 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9207087779 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.9 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0450716654478 0.242375264174 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246181741267 0.0925447433944 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499147962902 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0322001607509 0.151781067708 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557723144325 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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