In modern societies grandchildren rarely spend time with their grandparents what do you think are consequences of this

Essay topics:

In modern societies, grandchildren rarely spend time with their grandparents. what do you think are consequences of this?

Although such topic, in all likelihood, will never yield to a consensual agreement, the constructive dialogue on the amount of time that kids spending with their grandparents can lead to a thought-provoking discussion. my opinion is, irrespective of the numerous arguments that exist on either side, grandchildren rarely spend time with their grandparents and this has negative consequences on the societies.

there a number of reasons in favor of my stance. To begin with, due to the new technology, kids spend more time on their laptops and ipads, and this for sure affect the quality time that they can spend with their family. It is important to note that while kids playing on their ipads , they migth get affected by the idea in the game they play. Therefore, the aforementioned discussion shows that grandchildren rarely spend time with their grandparents and this has negative consequences on the societies.

Another pivotal aspect of the argument is staying with granparents will give the kids more experience in life. this exemplifies that if kids stayed home without laptops, they get more soical inteligent.

In conclusion, I see there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided, and hence my opinion is that grandchildren rarely spend time with their grandparents and this has negative consequences on the societies.

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Average: 7.9 (2 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29493087558 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11762301574 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 139.433497537 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520737327189 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0174516103 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382424924721 0.242375264174 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178314574856 0.0925447433944 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156662182567 0.071462118173 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254291281673 0.151781067708 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118765495853 0.0609392437508 195% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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