Do you think card less society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; font-family: "Lucida Grande", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Although such topic, in all likelihood, never will yield to a consensual agreement, the
constructive dialogue on <span style="background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">card-less society</span> can lead to a thought-provoking discussion. my opinion is
irrespective of the numerous arguments that exist on either side, <span style="background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">the advantages of card-less society overweight the disadvantages</span>. </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; font-family: "Lucida Grande", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">To commence with, there are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. To begin with, <span style="background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">in the card-less society old people can deal in the conventional way that they are always using</span></span><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; font-family: "Lucida Grande", sans-serif; color: red; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">, and</span><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; font-family: "Lucida Grande", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"> <span style="background:
yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">this will not cause any problems for them when it comes to money</span>. It is important to note that </span><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; font-family: "Lucida Grande", sans-serif; color: red; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">when</span><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; font-family: "Lucida Grande", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"> <span style="background:
yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">old people use the conventional way</span></span><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; font-family: "Lucida Grande", sans-serif; color: red; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">,</span><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; font-family: "Lucida Grande", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"> <span style="background:yellow;mso-highlight:
yellow">they will not face any troubles</span>. Therefore, the aforementioned discussion shows that <span style="background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">card-less is good for society</span>. </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; font-family: "Lucida Grande", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that <span style="background:yellow;
mso-highlight:yellow">the young generations are more familiar with technology</span></span><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; font-family: "Lucida Grande", sans-serif; color: red; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">, and </span><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; font-family: "Lucida Grande", sans-serif; background: yellow;">they do not like to carry a big amount of cash</span><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; font-family: "Lucida Grande", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">. </span><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; font-family: "Lucida Grande", sans-serif; color: red; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">If</span><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; font-family: "Lucida Grande", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"> <span style="background:yellow;mso-highlight:
yellow">the young generations will choose between cards or cash</span></span><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; font-family: "Lucida Grande", sans-serif; color: red; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">,</span><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; font-family: "Lucida Grande", sans-serif; background: yellow;"> they will for sure choose to use cards</span><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; font-family: "Lucida Grande", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">. This exemplifies that <span style="background:
yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">there is also some advantages to the use of cards</span>.
</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; font-family: "Lucida Grande", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">In conclusion, I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the
arguments I have provided and hence my opinion is that <span style="background:
yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">the advantages of card-less society overweight the disadvantages</span>. </span><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif;
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Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
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What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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