Most alcoholics purchase liquor legally. According to your point of view, should stores in general be legally allowed to sell liquor to alcoholics?
In the modern era, alcohol is easily available everywhere without any jurisdiction which leads to a lot of troubles to civilization as well as becomes a heated issue among various people. I strongly accord that, liquor sale shoud be restricted to particular stores not everywhere. In this essay, I will discuss <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">various suitable reason in this context with a </span>plausible conclusion.
Firstly, liquor strictly sell out on registered stores to the adults only with individual documentation for proper records because liquor consist of high alcoholic contents which reduces the active senses of drinkers and they lose their control results in, emerges into accidents as well as in quarrels with other persons without any reason which can definitely harm on both sides. For an example, a person has to loose his life in an accident happened in front of my house where some drunk persons hit him when he was driving motorcycle.
Secondly, retailers always think about their profits and sell these beverages to anyone. To put a control, the government should put some serious laws on those stores who sell liquor to the teenagers because these youths are the future of the country and there is an old saying, if the youth of a country is adversly affected then the country would be a dead place soon. To explain it we can see the current scenario of some African countries where teenagers are killing the people <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">for drugs</span> in their own country.
In conclusion from the aforementioned paragraphs, I can say that the authorities must apply strict implication of required laws on the sales of liquor so that it would not spoil the social and economic stability of the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 414, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2323943662 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33259348398 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644366197183 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.3788402784 50.4703680194 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.111111111 104.977214359 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.9669160288 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162489803687 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641066830344 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654636555074 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088010249258 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249791098539 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 12.6369458128 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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