Most artists earn low salaries and should, therefore, receive social welfare from governments in order for them to continue their work. Discuss the extent to which you would agree/disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience and examples.
Nowadays, governments give social welfare to artists, which has attracted many controversies and drawn attention from the public. It is agreed that these artists do not have such high income, while on the other hand, stands a perspective that they should be supported in this way. In my opinion, governments should support these low earning artists. This essay will elaborate on both sides and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are various reasons why artists should receive funds from governments and the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that they do not earn enough to support themselves. As an illustration, artists are hardworking and dedicated but are not paid enough according to their skills. By this way, government funding offers little support to them and would help them to pursue their passion.
Nevertheless, there are some downsides, which can certainly overwhelm the effect of social welfare received by the government and the most alarming one roots from the fact that these artists become overly reliant on the government aids. Moreover, they become unproductive and lazy. Hence, this merits the case that free social welfare makes them unskilled and deviate them from their path.
In the light of above discussion, it is concluded that governments should help the low earning artists by providing social welfare, however, this welfare should be limited.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26548672566 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64653559912 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579646017699 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.898588583 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.181818182 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358644598939 0.242375264174 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129750604004 0.0925447433944 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696734561327 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219846922891 0.151781067708 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223868311347 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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