Nowadays, TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?
Nowadays, the role of television in our lives is controversial and has drawn attention from the public. While many claims that it provides the latest piece of information, others believe that it is a friend in need of them. In my view, television has undoubtedly become the most appreciated invention in this modern world that has a wide purpose. This essay will further elaborate on both sides and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin with, there are various reasons that support the use of television as a source of news and information. The most salient one is that by switching the television, we become aware of all the latest happenings around the world within few seconds. In addition, it helps to take major decisions beforehand that has a great impact on our daily lives. For instance, it provides the latest traffic jams and weather reports that are significant for our decision-making. Hence, television helps us to keep abreast of not only national but international news also.
On the contrary, for some television acts not only as a chatterbox but a device which kills their boredom to a great extent. Often, elderly and retired people who feel isolated and neglected perceive television as the most comforting device. Moreover, children watch many channels like discovery and national geographic channels that increase their knowledge and curiosity. Thus, this shows that television offers entertainment and relieves people in many ways.
This essay discussed television as a device full of knowledge, glee and zip to people. In my opinion, the best version of television is when it offers happiness to people be it by providing news, entertainment or instilling knowledge to younger ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 557, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ot only national but international news also. On the contrary, for some television ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, second, so, still, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, in my view, on the contrary, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14234875445 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9132151669 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576512455516 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.5030079094 50.4703680194 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1333333333 7.25397266985 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121021670597 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375943395625 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252933542889 0.071462118173 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701582435799 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0072832227434 0.0609392437508 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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