Family has always been the most essential unit of the society. This is where harmony, peace and love start to be learned and appreciated by each one of us. Time is required for us to realize the essence of having a family however, because of some reasons that the world obliges us to do in order to provide the physical needs of our family, the time that should be spent with them especially our children becomes insufficient.
In the modern world today everyone has been required to work hard especially the parents for them to sustain the needs of their own family. Everybody is trying to work hard in order to survive. Due to this they are unable to provide enough time to spend to their children for recreations, expressing their love and care and even guiding their children in their school assignments and activities due to busy jobs. After their office works, the parents are getting exhausted and thus instead of spending their time for their children they would prefer to take their time to rest to be prepared again for another tiring day at work.
Since their parents are unable to provide enough emotional support , children would prefer to spend time with their peers and in some other activities such as computer gaming and bar hopping instead of indulging their time for their parents or family. Due to lack of attention and time since children are inadequately provided with love and care, tendency is they would find ways to divert their attention to some activities that could possibly harm them like drug addiction , cutting classes , alcoholism and even unable to give enough interest in their studies.
As a conclusion, family must be given enough importance by giving them sufficient time. Even simple gestures like eating dinner together, giving them emotional support, assisting their children in their school assignments matter. Adequate time, attention and love are compulsory to have a joyful, harmonious and healthy family.
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- Modern technology is now very common in many work places.How do you think this has changed the way we worked?Do you think there are disadvantages to reply too much on technology? 89
- It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media.What do you think is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime?What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...able to provide enough emotional support , children would prefer to spend time wit...
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Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...their attention to some activities that could possibly harm them like drug addiction , cutting...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d possibly harm them like drug addiction , cutting classes , alcoholism and even u...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...em like drug addiction , cutting classes , alcoholism and even unable to give enou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 31.9359605911 160% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 326.0 242.827586207 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00613496933 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46624648901 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496932515337 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.377582265 50.4703680194 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.9669160288 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 7.25397266985 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276866880705 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106734779658 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583796534458 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171657692015 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565870305584 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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