music is important subject
The importance of music is important subject in schools which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact I recent years. In my opinion, the latter proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the preponderant one stems from the fact that. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that. Hence, it is apparent why many are favor of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 1207.87684729 71% => OK
No of words: 169.0 242.827586207 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0650887574 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.92707691288 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69330237169 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 139.433497537 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633136094675 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 379.143842365 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.444471611 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110272232373 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350024536729 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105007361019 0.071462118173 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0450798296442 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780805553404 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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