The news paper no longer a need in the modern society. What is your opinion?

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The news paper no longer a need in the modern society. What is your opinion?

one of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in news paper. there is a wide spread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.

There are number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that new paper can not only contribute to new spaper but also lead to numerous other benefits in various field. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one befits more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand in good stead, as far argumenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.

Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that its only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a systems, can they broaden their horizon, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility dedication as perseverance. Hence it is apparent why many are in favour of news paper is need to modern society.

According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of news paper is a need to modern society are indeed too great to ignore.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: One
one of the most conspicuous trends of today...
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Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...y's world is a colossal upsurge in news paper. there is a wide spread worry that this...
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...en it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and qu...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...ponsibility dedication as perseverance. Hence it is apparent why many are in favour o...
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Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...t is apparent why many are in favour of news paper is need to modern society. According...
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Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
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...reach a conclusion that the benefits of news paper is a need to modern society are indeed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86382978723 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82222313315 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4611628963 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.909090909 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129055951669 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599469061601 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10363144918 0.071462118173 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953438047665 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639095875341 0.0609392437508 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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