Nowadays Television has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some, it acts like a companion. What is your opinion?
These days, there is an ongoing debate among people about television and if it should be viewed as a positive or negative impact to society. While it is possible to claim that television provides a many source of entertainment to people my view is that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. In this essay, i shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument.
To begin with, there are several reasons why television is considered to be disadvantageous to society. One of them is that viewing of television can be a source of distraction in our lives, turning away our focus from the more important things in life. It can also be argued that we tend to waste hours in front of the television instead of working on our goals and ambitions in life. It should also be taken into account that children at a young age spending too much time in front of the television. For example, some people spend all their free time in front of the television instead of working on productive activities.
On the other hand, those who argue for television have a different view and say that it can actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that television can be a good source of information to learn new things if used correctly. Then, there are concern about people not viewing television to be unaware of current events and latest new around the world.
In conclusion, while there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that television usage is best avoided or minimized as we should focus on other productive tasks instead. I would strongly recommend that people view how much time they currently spend on watching television and see how this time can be put to better to better use.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...positive or negative impact to society. While it is possible to claim that television...
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...arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that television usage is best avoide...
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...vision and see how this time can be put to better to better use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 306.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68300653595 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68557669482 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516339869281 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0888278239 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972028585243 0.242375264174 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409057038293 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253208604482 0.071462118173 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614698091698 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165097389472 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 59.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.