Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life, and a bridge to spread news and awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?【V2】Television has many useful functions to play in everyone’s life, such as companion and entertainment. Discuss your viewpoint on TV and support your answer with examples.
The important effect of TV has become an essential part of life and it is very useful to everyone's life was always debatable has now become more controversal. The substantial influence of TV is very important media in this generation has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent year on important function of TV in human lives. It can be agreed that the TV is the main source of communication media which makes the world together.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why TV is necessary in this generation, but the most conspicuous one steam's from the fact that TV makes the people refreshed and it is the source of entertainment which keeps people happy. As an illustration, Tv will provide the latest information and news at everyday. For example, it provide the information about the news, weather report, natural disaster, accident report, crime report etc. In addition, TV keeps the all family member together, while watching TV all family member will sit together and enjoyed together which makes the relationship strong. Thus, TV is very important media of communication which helps people to upgrate information about reading, creativity, cooking recipie, exercise, gardening etc.
Another key of justification for upholding the notion is that TV plays a vital role in people life. For instance, TV is the source of intertainment for example, music, dancing programe, comedy shows etc. Thus, TV is useful to children to learn new things, for old people to memorised the past memory which keeps the people happy.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of TV is essential part of human life is prominent and TV brings the joy and happiness to the people face. They will not feel bored and lazy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...vide the latest information and news at everyday. For example, it provide the informatio...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...n and news at everyday. For example, it provide the information about the news, weather...
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Line 3, column 671, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...edia of communication which helps people to upgrate information about reading, cr...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'memory'.
Suggestion: memory
...things, for old people to memorised the past memory which keeps the people happy. From ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t memory which keeps the people happy. From what has been discussed above it ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97986577181 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76538572845 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520134228188 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0778498526 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216900610241 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826005000871 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068202079936 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141931689529 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417292506716 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.