Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?
Nowadays, the importance of TV has become long running dispute among people all around the globe. Although for many of people especialy older one TV acts as a companion, in my point of view I highly believe that watching TV is wasting the time. In this essay I will discuss about the advantageous and disadvantegous of using this kind of media.
To begin with, there are several reasons why I believe that watching TV is wasting time. Firstly, in many countries especially dictatership countries goverment provide people with some imporrer program which just want show their power of their soverenties. Secondly, seating in front of screen for long time has a teremendous hatmful effect for eyes.Finally, children and individual shoul spend their time on reading useful books which can increase people horizen.For exampel, a group of reserchers in Harward University undertook a study among student who spent five hours a day watching TV. The results reveald that the performance of them in their lesson were three times worst than other pupils. Thus, there is no need to burn our golden time watching TV.
On the other hand,there is no doubt tht watching TV can provide hapinees for individuals various positive points. That is to say, there are many people who living alone so there is no room mate to talk to as a result, watching TV is the best companion who they can share their time with each other. In addition, TV provide people a huge source of free information such as; news, educational program and intertinment.
in conclusion, Although there are many positive points in watching TV,personally I believe people should spend their time learning modern things which can not find in the TV.
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| 2017-11-16 | Amir NIkzad | 77 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98947368421 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70698059121 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2163977842 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1666666667 7.25397266985 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139318384288 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588997933001 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358236753823 0.071462118173 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984692766902 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541157029303 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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