Nowadays young adults like to leave their family and live alone. Are the advantages of this trend more than disadvantages?
Over the past century, leaving home to have an independent life has been prevalent
amongst youngsters in some countries. While there exist ample reasons indicating its
outstanding psychological and social benefits, there is contradictory evidence highlighting
its relative drawbacks.
It is a well-established fact that living independently in adolescence offers a wide array
of benefits. One of the leading advantages is without a shred of doubt personal autonomy
which results from self-reliance. Indeed, when young adults choose to leave their family,
they are reinforcing their individuality as well as self-confidence. Another equally notable
advantage of having an independent life in adolescence could be the fact that it cultivates
youngsters social skills. In fact, rarely can we see young adults who leave their family and
do not have remarkable interpersonal skills. Thus, it only makes sense for young adults to
leave their family.
Notwithstanding the advantages that leaving family in adolescence provides, it can be of notable
demerits. First and foremost, young adults' association with deviant peers can be highly harmful.
As a case in point, teenagers may give in to peer pressure and abuse drugs or commit petit crimes.
Moreover, leaving family can lead to the breakdown of family relationships. In other words,
inasmuch as members of a nuclear family live alone, they may become emotionally distant.
In summary, it is evident that despite reinforcing personal autonomy and fostering social skills,
leaving family in adolescence can culminate in deviancy and the breakdown of family; nevertheless,
as it can be observed, the advantages that leaving family in adolescence provides are far more
notable than the disadvantages to the point that they can be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, in fact, in summary, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69963369963 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22086560277 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578754578755 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4259634406 50.4703680194 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.142857143 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.12807881773 509% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295238093014 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100055633468 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722418578848 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838016057303 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692601594601 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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