Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent years, There has been a colossal change in the way of mass communication, thanks to the ubiquity of state-of-the-art technology. As such, there are both merits and demerits to this trend, although I am of the view that the former outdo the latter.
A large number of benefits can be attributed to this development. On the one hand, by utilising such advanced communication tools as Facebook, Twitter and the like, now media can reach such large range of consumers, as they no longer have to rely on conventional newspapers and magazines. On the other, with the proliferation of internet-enabled devices like notebooks and smartphones, people can check emails and read e-papers. Needless to say, all these benefits stand people in good stead.
Another pivotal aspect of this development is that it has enabled different societies whether they are situated locally or far way, to enlighten each other by sharing their knowledge in numerous fields. Besides, modern methods of mass communication can augment awareness of a range of societal issues that can be addressed accordingly. Hence, it is apparent how society benefits astronomically.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that these benefits of modern communication technology in today's mass media are indeed too great to ignore.
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- A government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 72
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- Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...such, there are both merits and demerits to this trend, although I am of the view...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...ew that the former outdo the latter. A large number of benefits can be attributed to this deve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, but, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27488151659 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13516333201 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63981042654 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8888671249 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.3 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0138043736575 0.242375264174 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00531853356466 0.0925447433944 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0107570247483 0.071462118173 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00930096723625 0.151781067708 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00953265477967 0.0609392437508 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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