“The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education” Einstein. Discuss this quote.
Education is a systematic process of learning new subjects whether it is important or non important. Many argues that learning should be interest oriented which do not require to study all the subjects and some believes that knowledge of all subjects are required in education system. I will give my opinion in upcoming paragraphs with examples.
To begin with traditional method of education, in this method of learning people need to learn all the subjects compulsory to throughout. There are enormous benefits of learning all the subjects which improves knowledge of all subjects and one can speak on any subject with interest. For example, scientist have a knowledge of science but if they do not have knowledge of math than science does not work alone. Both subjects knowledge require simultaneously so inn traditional education system gives same weightage to all subjects so it will become compulsion to complete the same.
Furthermore, in modern education system individual can select any one or two subject in which they are interested so one can focus on that and complete master degree but it does not work at final stage. For instance, for running pharma or any sector specific company one need to have knowledge of economy as well as pharma and any specific sector which interferes in learning.
In a nutshell, with multiple study of subject interferes learning in education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
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Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'studying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: studying
... interest oriented which do not require to study all the subjects and some believes that...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, scientist have a knowledge of science but if they do not have knowledge of mat...
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Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
... education system individual can select any one or two subject in which they are intere...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19383259912 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80549304133 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52422907489 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2132333131 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.9 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116855021645 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644394930847 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504667492481 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934586442619 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455802128838 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.