Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Recently, parents responsibilities for their children behavior has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question are parents liable for their youth' acts? Whereas it is a widely held view that both parents and authorities must remain accountable for young people behave. I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the social and legal standpoint, the youth's behavior is bound up inextricably with communal training, which indicates they lead to both social misdeeds and antisocial acts. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2014 demonstrates the relationship between poverty and upbringing environment, as well as an exponential increase in juvenile crimes. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of teenagers' misbehave is positively correlated with not only legal punishments but also social training.
Within the realm of family background, without the slightest doubt, formative years attribute to foster family, in that it would come down to a loving family, aggressive behavior and calm atmosphere. A salient example of such attribution is the nuclear family, which is a cause of concern since it was mistaken to take single-parent for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars have had the opportunity to pinpoint divorce problems. Likewise, hardly had they have confined their attention to authoritarian parents,over-protective and even lenient. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of poor upbringing.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that both parents and governments are responsible for children behavior. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youths'' or 'youth's'?
Suggestion: youths'; youth's
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Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , over-protective
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...ying goes 'alls well that ends well,' after analyzing what elaborated above,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74482758621 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28554648355 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 139.433497537 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672413793103 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.65920319 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197333206264 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523182197964 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854259399318 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121582540752 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883955216195 0.0609392437508 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 55.0591133005 200% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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