Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In this day and age, the subject regarding whether parents are responsible for their children’s acts and behavior has become a heated debate. Although contested by many, a substantial number of people hold true the notion that parents should take responsibility for their child’s actions, which I support it. This will be analyzed in this essay.
For one, it is commonly accepted that children are a fresh slate and they absorb even the tiniest bits of information from their parents. For example, a 5 years old boy can easily learn the coarse language, if his parents talk to each in an abusive way. This example clearly shows that children are like a sponge and their characters can be easily shaped by their parents’. Thus, it is quite evident why this idea has garnered support.
In addition, parents act as the child’s leaders, a and for this they are accountable for teaching social behavior to their child as well as disciplining him. As my experience, my nephew used to bring home his friend’s toys whenever he went to his house for playing. His parents talked with him and explained to him to why this unauthorized action is not a correct one. As this unacceptable manner could have become a habit, parents’ role to discipline the children and to teach them what is wrong and what is correct is quite evident. This example fortifies the argument of why parents are responsible for their children’s behavior.
To calculate, after analyzing how parent’s own behavior can mirror their child’s in addition to their leadership role, it has been proven that why they should be accountable for what their kid does.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an abusive way" with adverb for "abusive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 20.9802955665 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05434782609 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96169224988 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9744174487 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.307692308 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237254234107 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103478601525 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798261159712 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162302274723 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479001325593 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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