Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, treatment of the children has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether parents are just responsible for the behavior of the children or not?”, It is a widely held view that parents’ role in nurturing children is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that parents as a backbone of the family play a vital role in each society. To put into consideration, I express some reasons. First and foremost is that pupil’s character is formed under treatment of parents, so those families who have an acceptable knowledge and culture will be able to treat future generation in the best circumstances without any violence, social disorders, and aggressive behavior. Secondly, it can be argued that parents are usually considered as a role model for their children, so their treatment might influence on juveniles. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that many crimes proceed from those families who parents addicted to alcohol or drugs.
However, there is no doubt that treatment of the children provides people with various points. It should be taken into account that it is not rational to consider parent as the only factor for upbringing individuals, and the educational center must take some of this serious task. Moreover, it is quite clear that there is a strong relationship between parents and schools.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that some educational sessions must be taken into consideration to raise the public awareness of parents. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s, treatment of the children has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22635135135 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00156513531 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60472972973 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.9023535096 50.4703680194 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.636363636 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183444850171 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578861550695 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516939951512 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105013644961 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579575285547 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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