Everyone should stay in school until they reach the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Support your point of view with reason and/or examples from your own experience.
Pupils must stay at school until they reach the certain age is becoming a popular question among many demographics. While some people think that staying at school will help students to build intellectual abilities, others maintain that social activities are crucial or equal to the education. I am completely disagree with the above mention question. This essay will discuss both views in detail with an example.
To commence with, students are studying at school to get the knowledge they need to find a suitable job in the near future. It does not mean that other activities in life do not matter including social and sports. For instance, researchers suggest that to curtail the students daily life stress they should pay equal attention to education and outdoor activities. That is why everyone needs to find a suitable place in the society, which cannot be done if students stay at school.
On the other hand, many parents are worried about their children future, which force them to send their children at boarding school. These parents have underestimated the adverse effects of sending their children far away from home at very early stage. For example, research done by MIT has proved that a child with house education has more success rate than a child with school education. Moreover, children need to have diverse activities, which will help them to focus and build confidence.
In conclusion, parents have different perspective about how they should treat their children. In my opinion, the idea of spending 18 years of life at school is flawed, because it makes school more like a prison.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...equal to the education. I am completely disagree with the above mention question. This e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04511278195 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54577628206 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616541353383 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7464947397 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8571428571 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.25397266985 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161497073992 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571062913739 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385254963624 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101616345995 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360895237992 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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