Parents should be held legallay responsible for children's acts, What is your opinion?
The important effect of parents should be held legally responsible for children's acts was always debatable has now become more controversal. The substantial influence of parents are responsible for their children's has sparked the controversay over the potential impact of these trend on children's behaviour in recent year. In my opinion, it can be agreed that parents guideness plays vital roles in their children's daily life.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why parents supervision under their children is necessary but the most conspicious one steam's from the fact that parents guidness after their children's helps in children persenel development as well as professional development. As an illustration, a current study shows that due to proper guidness from parents in America Mr. Hari become first prime minister in 1882. In addition, parents close supervision and good suggestion helps to be a smarter, brilliant, and intelligent children's in the society. Thus, proper guidness under children's is very important to upgrade children's enucational and physcial activity.
Another key of justification for upholding this notion is that parent should legally held proper caring which helps to develop in childrten's carrer and social development. For instance, parents is a frist teacher's of their children's they got first knowledge from parents at home anything like good things or bad things.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of parents is responsible for every children's activity is prominent and parents should give proper suggestion, and knowledge to their children's and they should teach about the civilization of the society. Parents should shows the right path to their children's.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
...is notion is that parent should legally held proper caring which helps to develop in...
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Line 7, column 292, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'show'
Suggestion: show
...lization of the society. Parents should shows the right path to their childrens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49442379182 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86795685905 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553903345725 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0253785955 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37084494622 0.242375264174 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15871470963 0.0925447433944 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793942453824 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255863795441 0.151781067708 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081597126955 0.0609392437508 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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