Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s activities. What is your opinion?

The importance of parents in children’s activities, which has always been debatable, has now upsurged a lot of argument in favour and against it, thus it has become more controversial. The substantial influence of parents responsibilities towards their children has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in an integral part of the education system in recent years. It can be agreed that upside of parents duties for their kids are instrumental indeed;however, it has some drawbacks as well. The essay will elaborate both assertions and will provide a well weighed conclusion.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why parents have important role in their children’s life is unreservedly salient, but most conspicuous one lies in the fact that it’s parents duty to raise their kids in appropriate manner to secure their future. Only Parents;for instance, can make their children’s a success man by giving him proper knowledge.Therefore, it is a vital time for people to appreciate the significance of parents role for the overall amelioration of society.

Another key justification for upholding this notion in the fact that if masses wouldn’t take care for their child they will not be able to become a good man. For instance, their parents should spend a lot of time and give their priorities to their babies instead of their personal problems and jobs.

The above presented dissertation illustrates convinced features about the impact of parents responsibilities, and it is evident that it doesn’t offer any detrimental effects. Therefore, it’s benefits cannot be overlooked.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...cess man by giving him proper knowledge.Therefore, it is a vital time for people to appre...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... impact of parents responsibilities, and it is evident that it doesn't offer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48235294118 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4074211702 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623529411765 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8608115045 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.8 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26885222382 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107701528536 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450139574829 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162997556756 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029704087517 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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