Mass media, including TV, radio and newspapers, plays a pivotal role in shaping our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?
A person develops a certain type of personality because of the environment he lives in. This includes exposure to media such as newspapers, TV and radio and is considered as the most effective in shaping our character and way of thinking. This essay will discuss how these mass media plays a vital role in the personality development.
To begin with, the humans learn from the exposure that they get in life. It may include schooling, friends and media but the media is the most primary source of information for us as we are exposed for longer time to mass media in our daily routines. For instance, most of the family tend to watch TV in their free time and get information from it most of the times especially news. Thus, it is one of the effective source of learning.
Secondly, the purpose of media is to channelise the thoughts of a person in a required manner. This may be a requirement of government, opposition parties or some advertising companies. For example, continuously running the advertisement of KFC in the prime hours compels people to think about it , although it is unhealthy food but still they want to eat it. Therefore, the media have an important part in developing our thinking.
In conclusion, the media can play a vital role in our learning and shaping our overall personality including our opinions. In my opinion, media is the most effective in shaping our personality and thinking patterns.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e hours compels people to think about it , although it is unhealthy food but still...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83673469388 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87673078544 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54693877551 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8881880393 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1538461538 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.25397266985 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287380824021 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953472045296 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103879922046 0.071462118173 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181619148228 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112287525982 0.0609392437508 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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