Parents should be held legally responsible for there children acts.What is your opinion? support it with personal example.
The important effect of children, Which was always debatable, but has now become more controversial. The sustainable influence of children has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational and this essay will further elaborate the reasons for forming the positive and negative affect of this trend and thus will lead a logical conclusion.
At the outset there are numerous reasons for children activities but the most conspicuous one stems are children spend most of time with their parents. As an illustration many parents punished their children behavior. Furthermore parents have legal responsibility of upbringing child and they can not avoid that.
Nevertheless, according to some people there remain some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of children, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact children are not under the parents pressure. they always want to do what they want and some times they don't want to follow the instructions of their parents even they disrespect their parents and this leads to a dispute among them.
From what has been discussed above it can be conducted that the impact of children is prominent and the way of thinking which they have kids want to do thinks according to themselves should be overlooked either.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... spend most of time with their parents. As an illustration many parents punished t...
^^
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...rents punished their children behavior. Furthermore parents have legal responsibility of up...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ging child and they can not avoid that. Nevertheless, according to some people t...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ren are not under the parents pressure. they always want to do what they want and so...
^^^^
Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...o do what they want and some times they dont want to follow the instructions of thei...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, look, nevertheless, so, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20982142857 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76903416794 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3910508617 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.666666667 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215358876611 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855875978446 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345836563638 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127047275093 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443922312689 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.