Parents should be legally responsible for their children's acts.what is your opinion?support it with personal example.
In this day and age,there is an ongoing debate among people about responsibility of childeren's behaviour.Although some people believe that society such as school and university are the main factor of childeren's acts,in my point of view parent's should be legally resposible for their childeren's behaviour.
To begin with,there are several reasons why parents are responsible for their choldren's acts.first and foremost is that parents are the firsr role model for childeren .In other words, the immitate exactly of thier parents manner.Eventhough many docters argued that embro can hear the bad words from their mother;s wombs. Secondly,it can be argud that the character of people are shaped in an early age when they grow up in homes with their parents.In addition to this information,it should be taken in to account that parents should provide children with appropriate manner to formed their children personalities.
however,Standford University carried out a seperate study to test the hypothesis that the commite crime is associated with criminan parents manner.The resualt reveald that society play pivotal role in childerens behaviour.That is to say,if childeren are not recieve an approporiate upbringind by their childeren,they will easily affected by society.
in a nutshell,parents play key role in children character.I strongly believe that parents are the main legally responsible for children's acts.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2017-10-13 | Amir NIkzad | 77 | view |
- Nowadays age discrimination in any company has become a common trend. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? 85
- The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books and they shouldn’t waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos and DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statem 77
- Climate change is huge concern in today’s world. Discuss about the roles that Government, corporates and individuals can play to improve it. 88
- In under developed countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. 77
- In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last 100 years, medicine, science or technology? 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
In this day and age,there is an ongoing debate among people about...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
... responsibility of childerens behaviour.Although some people believe that society such a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...y are the main factor of childerens acts,in my point of view parents should be lega...
^^^
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
... childerens behaviour. To begin with,there are several reasons why parents are res...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s are the firsr role model for childeren .In other words, the immitate exactly of ...
^^
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...are the firsr role model for childeren .In other words, the immitate exactly of th...
^^
Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Eventhough
...mmitate exactly of thier parents manner.Eventhough many docters argued that embro can hear...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ords from their mother;s wombs. Secondly,it can be argud that the character of peop...
^^^
Line 3, column 449, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...hey grow up in homes with their parents.In addition to this information,it should ...
^^
Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... parents.In addition to this information,it should be taken in to account that pare...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...formed their children personalities. however,Standford University carried out a sepe...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Standford
...their children personalities. however,Standford University carried out a seperate study...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...associated with criminan parents manner.The resualt reveald that society play pivot...
^^^
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: That
...ay pivotal role in childerens behaviour.That is to say,if childeren are not recieve ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...e in childerens behaviour.That is to say,if childeren are not recieve an approporia...
^^^
Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...proporiate upbringind by their childeren,they will easily affected by society. in ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...ind by their childeren,they will easily affected by society. in a nutshell,parents pl...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...hey will easily affected by society. in a nutshell,parents play key role in chi...
^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , parents
...ly affected by society. in a nutshell,parents play key role in children character.I s...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...nts play key role in children character.I strongly believe that parents are the m...
^
Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rongly believe that parents are the main legally responsible for childrens acts.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, in fact, such as, in other words, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68544600939 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30009213879 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610328638498 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.5024630542 205% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.8849080127 50.4703680194 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 242.2 104.977214359 231% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.6 20.9669160288 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.6 7.25397266985 325% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.33497536946 394% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316510436357 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18549168658 0.0925447433944 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701303544578 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197104183453 0.151781067708 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940542816262 0.0609392437508 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.7 12.6369458128 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 53.1260098522 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.9458128079 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.61 11.5310837438 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.3980295567 181% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.5123152709 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.