In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last 100 years, medicine, science or technology?
In the past century antibiotic, airplane and computer were the most important inventions of the world. Antibiotics are considered as one of the greatest inventions because it increase the life expectancy of the human being. While those will help people to get cured from dangerous diseases. It also strengthens the immunity system of people.
Airplane is one of an amazing invention over the past century, because it has significantly contributed to the national economies through tourism industry. Besides that airplane has encouraged people in travelling across countries giving them an opportunity to explore the world.
Computer consider as the most valuable invention among the three because it has made the world into a village. Globalization has became realized due to this invention. Meanwhile e-commerce made the businesses into a different path. Virtual businesses are popular in present market with the sponsorship of the technology. Computer is a beneficial to both elder and younger groups since it can be used to improve their knowledge.
In conclusion that computer can be categorized as the eminent invention of the past century.
On my point of view, among medicine, science and technology; technology is the greatest innovation. Through technology people can invent more which belongs to differnent sectors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56862745098 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99421138315 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612745098039 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1748367976 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.1428571429 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 20.9669160288 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165542354416 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533655554925 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544470162079 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968381139025 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420196814119 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 53.1260098522 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.43 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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