Recently, the phenomenon of moving to urban areas and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that this movement cannot be highly beneficial for people, such an issue is regarded as thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that leaving rural areas can be negative, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to dismiss movement for urban areas. At first, urban living has many benefits such as cheap public transportation and more jobs for people. However, there are many disadvantages with urban life. For example, crowded streets and noisy houres at all times of day and night.
In addition, cities have better education systems and medical centers for all ranges of ages. But leaving rural areas could face the societies to food products issues. For instance, a recent scientific research undertaken by a reputable university has shown that a significant number of food suppliers are the farmers that grow foods such as fruits and grapes on farmlands in villages.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that the drawbacks of urban migration far outweighed its drawbacks. Not only for people in the present time but also for our future descendants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25570776256 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84017530722 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65296803653 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2333443928 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9166666667 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.25397266985 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24394689816 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851101854743 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467902268949 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128199198902 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207219693022 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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